Score: 5

"five"

submission: Projectiles

date: September 13, 2005

wasnt bad, it was a bit buggy..
since it doesnt work well with small, large and negitive numbers you should of restricted this..
simple concept, kept simple..
overall i like it.

Score: 2

"needs work.."

submission: Grav Ball

date: September 9, 2005

in the current state the game is pointless,
it needs a scoring system:
time.

Score: 6

"nice"

submission: Bye Bye My Lady

date: September 8, 2005

i like the idea,
i like the flash.
song wasnt bad either..
well done.

Score: 3

"pacman.."

submission: Maya

date: September 8, 2005

it really is just pacman. taken from a tutorial with a new skin..
not impressed, i voted fairly - 0.

Score: 0

"sticky"

submission: Stick Fight! Lutinha r0x

date: September 8, 2005

to short.. to sticky..
seen so many of these before, if you are going to do a stick fight you have to do something special to make it stand out.
you did not do this.
the blood looked like red lightning, there was no sound effects, no animation that makes you go "ohhh wow" etc.

Score: 0

"lucky dog?"

submission: Charles

date: September 8, 2005

summoning data? not funny.
the shark is poorly drawn and really makes me want to close the movie.
eye animation could of been alot smoother..
trace bitmap never works..
this is a shame that you honoured your dog in this way..
(s)he deserved better.

Score: 9

"good work."

submission: -Shooting Range-

date: September 8, 2005

i like this, animation is for the most part smooth..
realistic and yeah..
i dont really know how you could make this better.
good job :)

Score: 2

"you can do better.."

submission: hemachromatosis the flash

date: September 8, 2005

preloading animation was good the 1st 2 or 3 times, then i had an epileptic fit...
if you put your efforts towards entertaining rather then informing you could have got the same message/information across in a better manor..
good effort though.

Score: 5

"one line summary"

submission: Power Stones

date: September 8, 2005

art: looked solid for the most part, there was times when it looked as though you rushed it.. lacked in style but it was good.
sound: what sound? i didnt use to mind text for speech but as movies have improved on NG i have come to expect sounds, not good enough.
you have potential and if i get time i will be looking at your other work.

Score: 2

"ok."

submission: A montage of DOOM!

date: September 8, 2005

this is better then most frame by frame movies..
however, it could of been so much better with little changes..
music and/or sound effects.. etc.
your humour is obviously fairly random and it showed, alot of things didnt make sense and took away from the viewing pleasure.
the highlight for me was the fire, it was cool looking.
i struggle with stylising fire but you did it well.